The first picture, albeit somewhat reduced, is the original. The second is what I did with Lr and Ps.

Any thoughts from the peanut gallery? Original photo was RAW. White balance, crop, some vibrance, contrast, and sharpening was done in Lr. A little more color work and shadows/highlights were done in Ps.

Canon 50D, Tamron 70-200 f/2.8

200mm, f/7.1, 1/1000 sec, ISO 160